Hi Mariah! Wow! You can sure say a lot without using many words. That is a real talent. Anybody can hammer out a dramatic message using 2,000 words or so, but very few people can do so with just six. I loved the one, “Don’t talk to me, my friend.” It was so masterfully created and done. I really enjoyed it. Thank you for sharing this with everyone. And the one for your father is fantastic as well. I think our fathers would really get along. They seem to be similar people. You really have a skill for this kind of poem. If you like it, I really encourage you to do more. I think you’re good enough to have some published! I honestly do, you’re really good at this! Keep writing, I’m sure one day you’ll be very famous for your talent and beautiful writing style. Stay Snazzy, Taylor Denton
I like your six words you chose for each life story. The feeling of 'don't talk to me' is one we can all relate to, especially during early mornings. You indeed paint a variety of pictures with words from what I have read by you. Dark, powerful, mysterious, or caring are the sort of paintings you've created and I've enjoyed writing them. Ah, yes. I know what you mean by "I don't make rules I enforce" in more than just a parental figure. Overall, you are good at saying a lot with limited words, and you never seem to say too little with too many words. I can't say that for all authors, as some never seem to reach their point no matter how many words they use. Thanks for sharing this piece with us and summing up yourself in such a good way. Your future works will be a treat.
Hi Mariah!
ReplyDeleteWow! You can sure say a lot without using many words. That is a real talent. Anybody can hammer out a dramatic message using 2,000 words or so, but very few people can do so with just six. I loved the one, “Don’t talk to me, my friend.” It was so masterfully created and done. I really enjoyed it. Thank you for sharing this with everyone. And the one for your father is fantastic as well. I think our fathers would really get along. They seem to be similar people. You really have a skill for this kind of poem. If you like it, I really encourage you to do more. I think you’re good enough to have some published! I honestly do, you’re really good at this! Keep writing, I’m sure one day you’ll be very famous for your talent and beautiful writing style.
Stay Snazzy,
Taylor Denton
You do paint with words! I love that idea...
ReplyDeleteI like your six words you chose for each life story. The feeling of 'don't talk to me' is one we can all relate to, especially during early mornings. You indeed paint a variety of pictures with words from what I have read by you. Dark, powerful, mysterious, or caring are the sort of paintings you've created and I've enjoyed writing them. Ah, yes. I know what you mean by "I don't make rules I enforce" in more than just a parental figure. Overall, you are good at saying a lot with limited words, and you never seem to say too little with too many words. I can't say that for all authors, as some never seem to reach their point no matter how many words they use. Thanks for sharing this piece with us and summing up yourself in such a good way. Your future works will be a treat.
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