I closed my eyes and gripped the blue paddle of the canoe.
The sky was cloudless on that day, the 12th of April. I opened my
eyes to a gush of arctic wind. The glaucous color of the canoe almost blended in with the sea that was below me. I looked forward
and there lie a tall, thin ice cave. I lifted up my paddle and rowed into the
cave, saying goodbye to the cyan sky. I made my way into the mouth of the cave
while water droplets fell from stalactites and on to my jeans making me shiver.
I looked at the water, which was as clear as ice. I saw fish swimming along
beside me. I watched them swim faster and faster until they jumped out and back
into the water, their scales shining like sapphires.
I leaned back in the canoe and closed my eyes once again,
thinking of my hometown and the little kids wearing brown dresses and sandals
on their little feet as they ran by on the cobblestone street. Some of the
girls sat on the side of the street, drawing in the dirt with skinny sticks.
The smell of warm bread was always adrift in the air as it seeped out of small
wooden and clay cottages. But I knew I wasn’t there. I was drifting in a boat
into the darkness of a cave.
As I drifted further into this cave, I was greeted by a
bright yellow light. This light was shining as bright as the sun. As the boat
drifted closer, I realized it was. I was out of the cave and greeted by a sandy
beach. Though the air that touched my skin through my golden jacket was still cold, the beach
warmed me up on the inside of my body. Before I reached the beach, I heard the
song of a canary singing from some brush in the distance. My destination lied
on the other side of the brush line where the sun’s rays touched the earth and
the birds sang.
The moment by boat touched the sand, I spotted the green Greyleaf
Willow tree. I jumped out of my boat and my feet slammed against crunchy grass.
Before I went anywhere, I reached back in the
boat and grabbed my jade embedded
bag. Right as my hand reached the bag, my feet were taking off up the hill and
between the patches of shrubbery. When I got to the top of the hill I saw my
house. I stood and watched my mom tend to her garden to the north of the house.
My baby sister was in the front playing with the leaves of the lilies. My dad,
sitting inside by the window eating some celery–his favorite snack. I know this
home is not the house I knew so long ago, but here in Greenland I have my family
I like the image of the fish swimming and "their scales shining like sapphires." I also like the ending where you mention family being a form of "home."
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