My name is Jencie
and this is my story. Beyond the tall
mountains and past great forests and streams, lay a little white flower on a
soft grassy hill. This little flower does not stand more than a couple inches
tall. It has five delicate heart shaped petals with specks of hot pink in the center but its scent is a warm vanilla and spice.
You Might be thinking, what is so special about this little
white flower? You see, this is no ordinary flower. In this world we live in,
very few people know of this flower. It is hidden from all who desire greed and
power. Those very few people that know of this flower call it The Flower of the Mind and Soul or The Flower of Dreams. I like to call it The Flower of the Way
it Should Have Been. Call it what you want. It is one in the
same.
I picked the beautiful flower. When I did, the clouds piled
up, blocking the sun and the wind picked up greatly. I didn’t know what to do, so I just stood
there. After a short moment, the wind died down and the clouds left as quickly
as they came. I continued to stand there, trying to comprehend what just
happened. All I knew is that I heard music playing. Upbeat music. Happy music.
I followed the sound. I walked down the grassy hill. A stream greeted me. I followed it downstream and was welcomed by a sight I never saw in my whole life. Colorful trees. They were all sorts of colors. Green, blue, orange, purple. Along with the music, I began to hear laughter from children. And sure enough on the other side of the stream, there were children no older than ten chasing butterflies with their hands up and their little feet galloping. Just the thought made me smile. There were women washing clothes in the stream, the children were most likely theirs.
Up in front of me lay a painted white bridge that went across the stream. I walked up to it and placed my hand along the railing. I slowly walked up as the bridge rose and walked faster as the bridge fell. I was under the colorful trees now. I had just realized how tall they were. I looked in front of me and saw little cottages. Because of the size of the trees, they looked to be houses of faeries. I walked closer to the village and the sound of the music still continued to grow. I could tell that the houses were made of straw as well as their roof and the doors. The cottages were still not very big. There were probably no separate rooms. I looked down and the floor turned from grass and dirt to a cobblestone road. Few people were on the streets. They all seemed so happy and walked to the beat of the music. I continued to walk down the road and the further I walked, the cottages grew in size and some were made out of wood. More people were further down the road. It all looked like I stepped back in time, one thousand years. I still continued to scan the village. There was a blacksmith building, a jewelers, even a bakery.
I followed the sound. I walked down the grassy hill. A stream greeted me. I followed it downstream and was welcomed by a sight I never saw in my whole life. Colorful trees. They were all sorts of colors. Green, blue, orange, purple. Along with the music, I began to hear laughter from children. And sure enough on the other side of the stream, there were children no older than ten chasing butterflies with their hands up and their little feet galloping. Just the thought made me smile. There were women washing clothes in the stream, the children were most likely theirs.
Up in front of me lay a painted white bridge that went across the stream. I walked up to it and placed my hand along the railing. I slowly walked up as the bridge rose and walked faster as the bridge fell. I was under the colorful trees now. I had just realized how tall they were. I looked in front of me and saw little cottages. Because of the size of the trees, they looked to be houses of faeries. I walked closer to the village and the sound of the music still continued to grow. I could tell that the houses were made of straw as well as their roof and the doors. The cottages were still not very big. There were probably no separate rooms. I looked down and the floor turned from grass and dirt to a cobblestone road. Few people were on the streets. They all seemed so happy and walked to the beat of the music. I continued to walk down the road and the further I walked, the cottages grew in size and some were made out of wood. More people were further down the road. It all looked like I stepped back in time, one thousand years. I still continued to scan the village. There was a blacksmith building, a jewelers, even a bakery.
“Would you like some poppy-seed bread, child? I just pulled
it out of the oven!” The voice broke my thoughts.
Standing to the left of me was an elderly man with silver,
stringy hair that was pulled back in a bun. He was not a plump old man, but
rather fit for his age. He wore a manila colored apron that covered a brown
tunic. I looked at his face and he bore a kind smile and shiny light blue eyes
that smiled with his mouth.
“I don’t have any money, sir,” I said, holding my left hand
up.
The man giggled and looked down for a second before turning
his gaze upon me.
“Dear,” he said, “here, you don’t need money. Everyone that
is a part of this place doesn’t need money. People can have as much bread as they
want. Because I give out bread, I get a place to live and clothes on my body as
well as protection from those outside. Who needs money when there are more
important things to worry about? We are a family and we want to stay and work
together. Take it, child,” Once again he lifted the bread towards me and smiled
as if giving me the bread meant the world to him.
I took it and dipped my head, “Thanks.”
“Anytime!”
I continued my descent into the city. I glanced back at the
friendly baker and he waved me goodbye.
People were gathered around four men and a woman. Two men
were playing the fiddle. One was playing a guitar looking instrument, the other
man was beating a barrel, and the woman was playing an instrument that looked
like a flute. They were all assembled at the corner of a street that split in
two. The people were clapping and singing an optimistic tune. I took the path
to the right. Almost immediately after turning right, two men ran past me with
knifes strapped to their sides. They ran through a doorway with a fence
surrounding it.
I walked over to the fence to look in between the wooden strips.
On the other side, there were both girls and guys, most likely no older than
25. Most were gathered to one side of the stadium. Some were sitting on pews
overlooking the stadium.
I walked through the doorway that just a couple seconds
before the two men walked into. I stopped walking when I was through the
doorway and sat down at the pew that was right by the doorway. I was looking
down into the field. Two men were fighting with swords. Were they soldiers? I
continued to watch as they were stopped by two older men that looked like they
were instructing them.
In that instant, I heard a horn. Arrows were flying from
the trees and the people on the field moved almost instantly. They ran up the
stadium seating and to the several doorways on the sides of the stadium. Was I
supposed to go to?
I heard voices of the people saying things like “It’s
happening again” and “bless the people of the village, bless our weapons”. I even heard one person say, "Grab the unicorns!"
“Come on, miss. You better be on your way,”
I looked up at this boy who was probably a little older
than me, a sixteen-year-old girl. He offered me a hand. After a slight
hesitation, I took it. His grip was strong. Together, we ran through the
entrance. He led me a different way than the crowd of armed people were going
to a house.
“I know you’re not from here, but you should be safe here,”
his voice was kind. The smile upon his face made me think everything was
alright, even though I had absolutely no idea what was going on.
Faster than I could think, he drew his sword out from his
sheath and turned around. A ping sound
was made. He was not fighting anyone sword to sword, he blocked an arrow.
I just stood there.
“Go,” he deflected another arrow off of his sword. He
turned his face to me. “Just promise me you’ll come back,” the soft blown color
in his eyes drilled into mine. I slowly shook my head.
I wanted to ask him what he meant by that promise. Was I
about to leave the wonderful world I stepped into?
He winked at me then left. I ran into the house. It was a
cute little house.
“In here!”
Two people with hoods covering their face ran towards the
house that I was in. I crouched down behind the wall and placed my head in
between my knees. My hands were shoved into my pockets of my purple laced
jacket.
I felt something. Something was in my pocket.
The flower.
I took the flower out of my pocket and lifted my head to be
able to see it. I smelled it. The smell reminded me of my grandparents’ house.
I closed my eyes and hoped to get out of this sticky situation.
I heard a song. A whistle of a bird. I felt the wind. I
opened my eyes. I was standing on the hillside I started out on. The city was
gone. The colorful trees and the children chasing butterflies. But then a second after feeling bliss, everything went black.
The old rocking chair squeaked as Grandma slowly stood up.
"No Grandma! The story can't end there! I wanna know more. Who were the bad people? Who was that boy? What did you ever eat the bread? Grandma please!"
The little girl jumped up and down to try to get Grandma to stay. She grabbed on to Grandma's night gown. Grandma turned around and bent down so she could be at eye level with her granddaughter.
"Delilah, the rest of the story, well that's for you to find out," Grandma smiled and looked up above her blackened fire place where a small glass frame sat on top of the ledge. There, in the small glass frame rested a little white flower.

I loved the imagery and descriptive words. Keep it up!
ReplyDeleteWow Mariah!
ReplyDeleteloved the story! I felt like I was actually there. The ending was great too it all tied together. Keep writing youve got a gift!
Dan
Hi, Mariah,
ReplyDeleteWait...so did the grandma actually go to that beautiful place? She was the young girl in the story? Your story is amazing, and wonderfully written! It left me wanting to know if Delilah would ever find that mystical place with the help of the little white flower. I also loved the imagery that you used in the story; I could picture the the boy deflecting the arrows, and the beautiful little cottages. I look forward to reading more of your writing! Fantastic job!
Meghan
I like the way you worded the paragraph about the flower's varying names. And I love that it shows up in the frame at the end. This makes me think of the grandpa reading the story in The Princess Bride and building up the suspense.
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